獎學金申請書範文

成績優秀的學生出國留學都想獲得獎學金,但是競爭也是很激烈的,不僅僅個人的背景要強,在獎學金申請書範文上也要多下工夫的,美國留學要申請到獎學金,首先要讓獎學金評審委員會的刮目相看,其次,才考慮托福、GRE等硬體條件。所以即使硬體條件不突出,但獎學金申請書得到評審委員會的青睞,那得到獎學金的幾率就會大增。我們用例子來說明,獎學金申請書應該如何寫。

Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had thechance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by handto obtain drinking water and use ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don』t have muchuse for televisio and personal computers. But when my father gave me an oldradio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionand see what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with aconfused grin, surrounded by wires and metal, I looked up at my father andasked where the noises were...(有刪節)

  合理地闡述了申請者學習電子工程的動機,學習動機是評審委員非常看中的。同時,讀了這段文字,會使讀者沉浸在對童年往事的美好回憶里,藉此打動評審委員的心。

  另外一篇修改過的文章開頭用詩一般的語言寫道(有刪節):

......I first read this paragraph from Madame Curie as a 14-year-oldchild, and I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking,"What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!" As I grew older,this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. Ibegin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love ofscience, and encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.

  結尾呼應了開頭,闡述了作者為什麼要去美國讀書:

I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read thebook, another pa age leaped out: "She was now 24-an age when some of hergreat contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries... Maria tookthe train from Warsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca."

For me, the intellectual Mecca is the United States. ... I hope tocontinue my study and research, as detailed below. One day, I hope to find thepure esthetics of biology and reach its luminous summits.

我們可以想像地到,評審委員在讀了這位女士的申請文章以後,腦海里肯定能栩栩如生地浮現出一個好學上進、充滿遠大抱負的未來女科學家的形象,怎麼會不拍案叫絕,全力幫助這個女士登上前往學術聖地美麗堅的飛機,成為第二個居里夫人呢?

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